Forum:Ron Weasley's page

The page is...a mess, to put it bluntly. There's more than a bit of information that's flat-out incorrect (whoever wrote/edited the article said that Hermione asked Ron to Slughorn's party and he accepted, and that's just one instance.) The articles tend to stray off-topic or go into far too much detail than is necessary, the actual writing style and context is overly descriptive and even sometimes melodramatic. It sort of reads like fanfiction at times. Back to the going off-topic part, there are large paragraphs throughout that spend a lot of time speaking of the accomplishments/feelings/etc of other characters, and giving a token sentence about what Ron's reaction to that is. "Harry sneezed, but Ron was fine with that". (That's not in there, obviously, I just used it as an example of what's peppered throughout the page. I definitely think a MAJOR cleanup is needed on his entry.--Amanda C Owens (talk) 21:51, September 15, 2015 (UTC)