Wow, I haven't finished it yet but it is really good.

not done but intresting

advice: your dumping alot of info thats not needed, I don't mean this is a mean way. Since this is a fanfic, most people already know why lily's middle name is luna, or how rose is related to sirius. Its also mostly unimportant to the story. Just a word of advice, the peice is great so Far!!

I don't have the stamina to read it right now but I will read it in a few hours