It feels more like a cursed (GEDDIT? Geddit? Nevermind...) fanfic than anything. Though I didn't hate it
Seeing this post also reminded me of an Austin McConnell video i watched some time ago, where he wrote a fix it for the Cursed Child, and a theatrical group actually performed it, and it was actually really good. here's the video
I will say I would definitely prefer his version more than the official one, but that's just me